Danny's flippers by Aisha

..As they swam through the rugged ocean , Both of t
hem heard a fascinating noise coming from behind  them .
BEEP ! BOP ! A submarine was approaching Danny and the
humongous beast . This wasn't any submarine , but one that
looked really odd. It made us look like miniature elephants !!
Just that second a herd of aliens jumped out of the submarine !
… 

Then the shark smiled and speaked hand over the cash .
As they gave him the cash it turns out the shark was a man
eating criminal . He had  one little brother who is a singer and
has got famous for one lame song . BABY SHARK !! After
that nonsense he talked about ewww ...the sea -weed bush
I am hiding behind stinks . Any-way  he explained about he
really was jealous of Sofie dossi's flexibility .

He said that he could back - bend  , chase people and then
eat or kill them everybody but only if he had legs .

Oh scuba divers there rescuing me ahh now I saved until our
next journey to be continued!

Buddy comment I Aleena have enjoyed your fantastic
writing I liked the way you used punctuation .

year 3 strategy 1 part 2 with Aurel

Year strategy 1 with Aurel

NATURAL VS HUMAN-MADE BY AISHA AND ALEENA

Synonyms and Alternatives by Aisha

My two week hoilday

Aisha’s slide  My holiday at SKIDS 

SKIDS everything is so  enjoyable , like the games they plan
there and the new friends you can make. I love those days
when you can just have a rest from school . “ Yawn “ 
I am tired of school days when my teacher Mr mc says it's
time for maths .I mean it isn't bad but sometimes I get
frustrated and confused .

Enough let's get  the boring stuff out of the way [ no offence ] .
Anyway on SKIDS  my favourite day was lazer tag . I was in
team red and we won .And on a few of my days my bff Tunde
came with her brother Beni .It's  so interesting and fun when
some one .

 On the last day it was a Mexican  Fiesta [ a Mexican party ]
Tunde was  there to . I knew that it is the last day until ,
January holiday [ Fact I love January ] . Usually we go to
Rainbows end . Also on the last day we got presents they
called my name  but said “we can't find one of your things “ they exclaimed . 

They told me to come back and  I saw in their hands for me it was are really smooth Smiggle book with candy  prints all over it .Also I got a box around medium size it was a craft paint your own ice cream bank . With light pink , blue , ,purple , white paint and it included a red paint brush.“ Well there's my day worked out “ 

In conclusion I hope you liked my holiday { for two weeks } until next time ! .

“we can't find one of your things “ they exclaimed . 

They told me to come back and  I saw in their hands for me it was are really smooth Smiggle book with candy  prints all over it .Also I got a box around medium size it was a craft paint your own ice cream bank . With light pink , blue , ,purple , white paint and it included a red paint brush.“ Well there's my day worked out “ 

In conclusion I hope you liked my holiday { for two weeks } until next time ! .

Sentence starters by Aisha

Sentence starters 

A friend is someone that helps you and makes you feel not alone.
And they give you company [ and they give you sometimes a lot of it]. 
But sometimes well you don't really get along with each other and fight.
[ But trust me friends are one of the best].

A time I was brave was when I faced my fear of heights.
And that time was when I went to the Fair Fall! [ at Rainbows end].
And now I love the ride. I always recover from all of my fears because I
believe that they can be achieved.

I dislike doing maths but now I realize that maths helps me understand life.
And now I absolutely enjoy it. I am really good at area and premindtor. Maths
also helps you with money like if you work in a bank or in a cashier. MATHS IS
VERY HELPFUL.

At school, I  am not very good at spelling but I always have great ideas,
good structure, amazing punctuation, and awesome vocab. I just need to
practice spelling better and I am a star.