Thursday, October 17, 2019

Danny's flippers by Aisha





..As they swam through the rugged ocean , Both of t
hem heard a fascinating noise coming from behind  them .
BEEP ! BOP ! A submarine was approaching Danny and the
humongous beast . This wasn't any submarine , but one that
looked really odd. It made us look like miniature elephants !!
Just that second a herd of aliens jumped out of the submarine !
… 

Then the shark smiled and speaked hand over the cash .
As they gave him the cash it turns out the shark was a man
eating criminal . He had  one little brother who is a singer and
has got famous for one lame song . BABY SHARK !! After
that nonsense he talked about ewww ...the sea -weed bush
I am hiding behind stinks . Any-way  he explained about he
really was jealous of Sofie dossi's flexibility .
He said that he could back - bend  , chase people and then
eat or kill them everybody but only if he had legs .
Oh scuba divers there rescuing me ahh now I saved until our
next journey to be continued!
Buddy comment I Aleena have enjoyed your fantastic
writing I liked the way you used punctuation .

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