climate change

Aisha’s slide
 Did you know how the Earth is getting warmer and warmer? Well, it’s called climate change. It’s when chemicals such as CO2 or burning fossil fuel gases pollute the air and sea. Living creatures and plants and even us humans can suffer from climate change. Our selfish behaviour has been us starting to cut down huge amounts of valuable trees that give us oxygen. If we didn't have one single amazing tree we would not be even living right now! One change that a country does will affect the whole planet. Natural climate changes are the following; volcanic eruptions, changes in the Earth’s orbit in space and changes in the sun's energy. I loved your writing Aisha, we did a good job together of restructuring your sentences to be a little clearer and easier to understand. Your writing feedback is by Mr Mc.